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Salvador Inocensio Jr.
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  • Fresno, Ca. 93704
  • United States
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Hi guys! I'm back. Where was I? On a long hard-driving, exhausting, educational, rewarding, sweet trip with thirty-three young minds. I am coming to an end of my fourteenth year of teaching elementary students - sixth graders. I love it - everyday,…
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Your writer's blog or website:
http://www.salinocensio.wordpress.com
What is your genre?
Poetry and Essays
What do you write?
poetry
Are you a pantser, a plotter, or a hybrid?
hybrid
What is your current project?
Setting up blog websites. Daily blogging, poetry, and the upcoming school year
How long have you been writing?
Ten Years
Published or Aspiring?
aspiring
What do you feel is your greatest strength as a writer?
My desire to be heard, and be a person that did not fade away with time. I would like my thoughts and presence on this planet be forever read and studied as an example of the literature, essays, thoughts, ideas, and poetry of my time. This desire is instilled not only in me but in my students, as a teacher that teaches them not only basic reading skills, but the enjoyment of reading and writing.
What do you feel is your greatest weakness as a writer?
Laziness, procrastination and not acting on an idea.
Do you have any specialized knowledge in some field?
The language of education, (acronyms a plenty), bilingual in Spanish and English
Age
fifty-three
Where are you from?
Fresno, California, United States of America
Looking for a CP or Taken?
looking

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Di Franz Where Are You?

Di Franz, sorry I got busy with the ongoing school year, and forgot that my responsibilities of being a good Crit Partner. Please do write, we had a new member join our group, "Poetic Thoughts." Do join us and add your knowledge and experience in the running a successful group.

Posted on November 27, 2008 at 2:17pm —

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At 5:28pm on February 3, 2009, miranda said…
where are you? not heard from you for ages!!
At 7:29pm on January 12, 2009, miranda said…
hi Salvador
Very flattered that you think my poem can help you. You may want to look at the rework i've just completed on it.

take care
At 11:50pm on January 10, 2009, miranda said…
Hi
Happy New Year to you Salvador. and a big thank you to you for taking the time to look at and critique my work.

Very best
Miranda
At 9:39am on December 1, 2008, Razorwire said…
Hey and how's it going.
At 4:54am on September 7, 2008, Salvador Inocensio Jr. said…
9/07/08
I'm glad you read these creations of mine that seem never to end or never finished editing. These babies have become part of my life and I hope the embed themselves into the future. I have this idea that I would hate to have this beautiful life and then nothing. I have a purpose which adds to my vigor to live, write, and teach. I would like to reach many others and I hope to teach many more children by ridding myself of the bureaucratic binds you referred to in your comments and open a national chain of charter schools that would mirror my style of education. I hope to convince some famous and non-famous people with money to invest in the future of America. "Democracy cannot function if it's people are ignorant and uneducated." Thomas Jefferson's quote is so very true in these times. A charter school would also give me the authority to make sure that the other three legs of my education model (think of a four legged stool,) does their part. The parents, support staff, and importantly the students themselves need to be held just as accountable as I am. Thank you for reading and commenting, keep in touch and I'll will too. Write back soon, Sal
At 8:44am on September 4, 2008, Di Franz said…
"Creations of My Mind" is beautiful. Very lyrical, and with clear images that punctuated (if that makes any sense) perfectly. And "His Eyes" - I've certainly seen that look directed at me, but have never been able to capture it in words like you've done. I said "yes, exactly" to myself more than once as I read it.

"When Do I Teach" had me laughing in a sad way. Laughing because I followed all the exhaustive testing requirements (they really are getting ridiculous, aren't they?) and sad because what you're describing is exactly the reason I didn't finish my own teaching degree. Anyone can follow the acronyms. Takes someone with patience and heart to continue despite overbearing legislation and still encourage creativity in the classroom. That deserves a thank you. And all the encouragement I can offer!
At 9:31pm on September 3, 2008, Di Franz said…


Hi, Sal. Thanks for teaching the joys of language. I washed out of the field, myself, but have never forgotten two people - the uncle who taught me to frame a shot, and the teacher who showed me the English language was fun to play with.
 
 

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