Mini and Long Plot Synopses

[Alicia]

Does anyone have any advice on how to make these pop? I sort of suck at the "business" end of writing and all my synopses sound flat.

I'm good at the logline, but anything longer doesn't have the pop it needs. Any suggestions would be fabulous.

Thanks!
Alicia

[Rachel Udin]

Post them and then you can see how it's done. Also try reading Evil Editor and Miss Snark.